Feedback

Don’t forget to capitalize.
You need a comma here.
Reword to avoid confusion.

But,
more importantly —
you are brave.

Here you are
showing up
with each letter on the page.

Writing into existence
your view
on the question.

Never confuse
gentle reminders
with judgement.

Remember,
I see you —
and you are brave.

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