This week, my students are drafting speeches about optimism. It can be tough to be optimistic in a world riddled with bullets and mired in unkind speech. In honor of my students, I crafted a brief poem:
Optimism
A finely sharpened pencil scratches
the surface of the white page,
Yes. I can.
Words on the tip of the tongue
begin to tumble in a rush.
Yes. I will.
A phone rings in the dark of night
as an ear attaches to the receiver.
Yes. Of course.
Optimism does not rest in the belief
But in the willingness.
This is such a lovely poem! Such a simple, accessible, important message for all! Thanks for sharing!
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Omigosh, I LOVE this! Are you sharing this with your students? So much figurative language!
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I love the last two lines of your poem because it rings so true.
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Yes! Yes! Yes! A poem with the glass completely full! Fun to read!
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Words to live by: “Optimism does not rest in the belief/But in the willingness.” Thanks for sharing!
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I love your alliteration: “Words on the tip of the tongue begin to tumble in a rush.” This is a familiar image indeed!
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I quite love this.
your third verse is especially powerful, as we imagine what might be at the other end of the phone line. We have all been there- needing to say “Yes, of course, I will…” The willingness. You took a fresh look at this idea.
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