What is the subject?
What is the predicate?
Really, who cares what makes up a sentence?
Grammar seems tedious and rule bound
to my eighth grade students preparing for
a state standardized writing exam.
We are much happier looking at
the beauty of grammar in…
that startling opening line
or the devastating last words
of a beloved book.
We know the author revised and revised
to ensure every carefully placed comma
created just the right mood
to lodge the sentence
in the reader’s heart for good.
I’m so with you! I am finding myself making up grammar-based love stories about coordinating and subordinating conjunctions to help engage students while teaching them usage.
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Yes, isn’t that the whole point!? “…to ensure every carefully placed comma/created just the right mood/to lodge the sentence/in the reader’s heart for good.”
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I so hate the abstrate terms: Subject / Predicate. You remind me of the importance of reading well crafted sentences. And the tediousness of the state tests your kiddos must take this month. I hope you share this post with your students. Help them keep grammar in perspective.
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